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Hi! I liked your piece. Is the narrator the Grim Reaper? Anyway, on to the review! I saw the red. The red. Repetitive. It kind of destroys the mood. The ...

Hi! This is my first attempt at Romance. It's a bit bloody though, dark even. >.>" Here you go -- Oblivion!! It's short, though. And a bit ax-crazy. Please tell ...

Haha. Me and my friends argued about this a long time ago, and the argument became so screwed up it lasted for days. I believe that yes, in extreme cases ...

Abortion should depend on circumstances. Rape = okay for abortion Consensual = not so okay unless the fetus will harm the mother Just because you don't want the baby (ex: ...

Eating disorders don't come from the media. They come from a lack of control. Or from a sense of perfectionism. That aside, I believe the media should stop showing skinny ...

Hello!! I'm going to review your piece. Lavender was asleep on the ground, her head resting on Lunar's back. Try the active voice. Lavender slept on the ground... Makes it ...

Hey! Great piece. Anyway, I only have a very small nitpick. If you do not fit into any of these categories, we are sorry to say that you may not ...

The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog. English, French, Italian, English, Spanish, French, Dutch, English The fast chestnut of vixen has jumped in the lazy dog. Haha. That's ...

Granted, but said island is so small it can't even fit a toddler. I wish I had a cat.

Maximilian: White, gray or an ice blue. Preferably white though. It makes dirt easier to spot. Gwen: I don't know...Something bright. Like yellow, or orange. Definitely not white, it's too ...

Hi! Here I am to review. First off, try to avoid the -ly words. They lean to telling. Of course, don't go overboard and use none, but use as little ...

Hm, I for my novel Overture, I'd have to pick two songs for the four main characters. Rayne and Hatta: Comatose, by Skillet I hate feeling like this I’m so ...

Shaun, I think. Or Shawn. Whichever spelling fits. My character is fifteen. He has curly brown hair, green eyes and slightly tanned skin. Tall, not lanky, but not lean either. ...

"I never finished Dickens before. I'm not one for classics. Besides, the public library hardly has any classics." - Gwen "Classics, movies, music...They're all entertaining for the first few moments, ...

Who is weakened by Kryptonite? A chicken